We have been focusing on descriptive writing to paint a scene in the readers head. This is some of our first attempts from Room 1. Keep tuned for lots more.
Thunder
6/09/12
It was a pitch black night and lighting shot across the sky like a cheetah running for the last time. A flood was let loose and water was rushing down scooping up anything in its way. Hail started crashing down on the damp, wet, frosty grass.
Lightning
06/09/12
The storm was gloomy, very damp and wet. The wind, lightning, thunder, and rain were creating a deafening amount of noise and trouble for animals and people to deal with. Suddenly, dark clouds started covering the dull sky making it pitch black.
Fantastic Two
6/09/12
One stormy night lightning sparkled in the dark sky. The lightning shone as bright as the sun.
That day the sky wasdusky andthe clouds were gloomy. The sound effects became frightening. The wind was getting louder, it was a horrible place. The moon was bright but the clouds started to block out the eerie moonlight.
ELLIE
6/09/12
The puddles were rising higher and higher.
As the the rain poured down it started to flood the dull town.
The clouds were getting darker and the wind was getting louder, it was a horrible place to be.
The moon was very bright but the clouds made it dark.
It was so gloomy that you could not see. Suddenly a gigantic cloud rushed over you and it poured with rain.
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